LuckyDee's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[starfox668nick - June 2023 Full Demo]

Hey this is pretty damn good! Acting and production quality are great, although if you want to use this as an actual demo the, yeah, it's way, way too long :)

Also, consider adding some sound effects and/or music for extra immersion. Looking forward to hearing more from you!

starfox668nick responds:

I will absolutely take this advice to heart. I'm really tryna get out there. I'm putting a new one out next month to improve the audio quality a bit. Haha and yes to also shorten this and make it seem less empty. Thank you!

[Kenkoy Character Demo Reel]

Lovely stuff!

KenkoiPhish responds:

Thank you so much LuckyDee that means so much coming from you 🥹❤️

[VoiceDemoReel]

Hey your acting skills are pretty solid. Overall sound quality is good too, but there's this ground hum throughout the recording which you might want to have a look at. Looking forward to hearing more from you!

Dahakka responds:

thanks for letting me know, i wanted it as raw as possible really but it is probably better just to take it out in post

[Commercial Voice Demo Reel]

Ace work once again, m'lady. Keep it up!

TrinaTan responds:

Always appreciate it :)

[Memories Past]

Golden work once again. Much <3

ZaazNG responds:

Thank you so much bb, much <3 right back at ya <333

[Burning Bush Radio episode 1]

Nice work! Also Night Vale <3

DisgruntledSkeleton responds:

Thank you!! Yeah Night Vale is amazing.

[TokyoDream Voiceover Demotape]

Hey man, welcome to the club, seems you're off to a decent start. A little boost to the overall volume of your track would be good, but other than that you're sounding great. Let's see what else you'll be bringing to the table. Good luck!

TokyoDream responds:

Thanks man, I really appreciate it. I bought a new Yamaha mixing board for my Shure mic so I'm still working out the kinks. Once I've gotten a few gigs under my belt I plan to do a new demotape. Really appreciate the feedback!

[Look Within]

Great work once more, my sweet potato

ZaazNG responds:

Thank you so much, pumpkin <3

[Homecoming]

Damn, this story is amazing, and the slightly monotone voice in which you tell it - which may or may not be a conscious decision to apply - works really well with it. The production could use some loving: the volume is kinda low, some EQ and a minute touch of reverb would add some sparkle to your voice and the background noise is an undefined rumble - either try to get rid of it or make sure it has definition. As for the storytelling itself, I don't think you need to actively put on another voice for your different characters, but if you don't, slightly longer pauses between their lines would help differentiate between them.

If you ever have another story like this one and polish it up like that, you'll have certified grade A material on your hands. Keep 'em coming!

Bleak-Creep responds:

Thanks! Yeah, the production was a rush job so that I could get it out right away and I know I’m probably not the best narrator either, but I might have to do something else with the story at some point or another. :)

I have some animations that are similar in the writing style, but they’re usually written as more of poems too. Thanks for the pointers! And thanks for listening too!

[The Boyahs - Jail - Episode 1]

Hey man, nice going, I think you're on to something here! The length of these skits is pretty daunting though, so I'll need to sit down and give them a good listen, but what I hear so far sounds like it could use some more sound effects or maybe a bit of music to spice it up further. And assuming you're not making heavy use of it yet, some EQ to clean up the voices. Feel free to hit me up if you want to know more. Either way, keep up the good work!

Risible responds:

About time I've received feedback on these things. I appreciate the helpful words!