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[Claritas Dungeon Crawler RPG - DEMO]

It looks really nice, but the gameplay doesn't look that appealing and the amount of text you need to go through to actually play at all, is way, way too high. If you want to rope players in, I'd say create a tutorial that combines instructions with actual gameplay. Good luck on your projects!

ClaritasRPG responds:

Hello, thanks for the feedback, I've shortened the tutorial.

[Fnf Gapple - Applecore Scratch]

And the same for this one. Consider publishing them as Movies instead.

Spectrum883 responds:

It'd be removed off the movies place because it's not a movie, it's scratch.

[Die for the Lich [v0.3.3]]

The admiration for 'Slay the Spire' is palpable, and replacing the cards with dice is an interesting - and sometimes frustrating - mechanic. But I love the way you made it work. Keep it up!

MadNukin responds:

Thanks and it's one of my favorite games of all time.

[Tomato Clicker]

Haha, ok so the game is pretty basic, but the collected artwork is magnificent - and thanks for featuring mine! I'd say move on to the sequel with some expanded gameplay elements, you definitely have the gameplay and artwork down.

Fish125 responds:

Glad you like it, we're hoping to be able to rollout an update or 2 with more features

[Escape From Deathmark Dungeon]

This holds a lot of promise, but the controls and the user interface - pardon my Dutch - are really crappy. If you can capture that roguelike feel through more subtle controls and a more informative UI, you'd really be on to something here...

Matty77 responds:

Thanks....I'm not exactly sure how to fix the UI/Controls - I'm not that good at picking up what's quite wrong with it...and I'm used to it (problem with being a solo dev sometimes) - but I'll think on it.

[KROMER CLICKER!]

Well... It works. But the visuals are poor, the music gets annoying real fast, investing in better clicks is completely worthless, the game is completely broken once you get infinite kromer and there's nothing adding to the game in terms of story, goal, background or originality. The engine works. Now go out there and make a game with it!

friskveryfresh123 responds:

thanks for the feedback!

[GSK - The Game]

This could be a nice game, but obviously this is only a control test. Add some music, some sounds and do a complete level, then try again. You'll get there.

I2ustySpork responds:

Thank you -- I am going to release a game soon and this is a simple test. Hope it runs well!

[777]

This is... something else. The premise is simple and easily understood. The math behind it - the 'Match' number the machine spits out - defies all logic. But with no way to control the outcome other than going through the randomization a million times, I don't see any replayability value unless you're already hooked on slot machines.

hhponygames responds:

The matches are based on color and or shape lol

[HOCKAG NEW ERA]

Eh... This could be fun, looks nice. But the GUI is confusing, there's no obvious control for attacking and the controls are clunky in an environment in which 1 wrong move kills you. This isn't so much a game as it is running to your death in 3... 2... 1...

A little explanation, either in game or on the page, could have massively helped here. The controls need a lot of TLC.

DRAGONSNOWS responds:

I REALIZED MY MISTAKE IN THE GAME, IN THE NEXT UPDATE I WILL FIX ALL THE ERRORS

[Wilhelm Scream Soundboard]

Game runs but doesn't respond to any of the keys (Win10/Firefox)

Update: referring to the spacebar and then expecting users to use the mouse for the other controls (which could easily be keys) is a bit confusing. But hey, it works. Replayability, unfortunately, is kind of limited.

econprazednoahbear responds:

you don't use the keyboard, you click om the numbers