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Loved doing the production on this one, quite challenging to create an outdoor environment in sound, first time I ever did so. Thanks for having me on board!

Awesome work everyone, pleasure to have produced this <3

So I promised you an official NGADM judge review and by gods will I stick to my promise - but having read through the reviews below, you're not going appreciate what I have to say. So I'll run with this:

I can't deny your track is very well made. I could go into technical details on this, but everything's already been said and it appears my skills in this respect mark me as the last person in this merry band to say something sensible about this.

But with all the feedback you're getting, all you do is complain and deny whatever criticism is thrown your way. You're basically bringing a knife to a gunfight to then start telling the judges they're doing it wrong and the competition is flawed. The music you choose to make is great for the dance floor, but in just about any competition you're doing yourself an enormous disservice by submitting something long and monotonous (compared to 99% of the other submissions). That's not the competition's fault.

Congratulations on your place in the finals - which you have definitely earned. A little self-reflection would suit you.

Sequenced responds:

I'm making music I enjoy doing, sorry.

XD

Audio is still rough around the edges, but your stories are hilarious!

Hey the acting on this is pretty damn solid! Work those production skills a little - the overall volume of the track is very low, creating a number of other challenges - and you'll be making amazing stuff.

ImDennisMenace responds:

Noted my man, thank you for the feedback! Genuinely appreciate it! I think I still have the project file saved so I can actually fix it this time.

Thanks all, it was a great ride! Congratulations to all contestants for their efforts, great work all around, and especially to the finalists and winner - awesome job!

Awesome work man, really tied the thing together <3

Damn are you being prolific - and funny too! The overall volume could use a little kick in the keister, but other than that this stuff is excellent. Keep 'em coming!

This is absolutely fucking gorgeous

Official ADM review:

This track blew me away. The minimalism of the first half is daring, but allows the quirks in chord progression and melodies to really shine. Very often they take unexpected turns, with the chords swerving into deep melancholy at 40s in and the melody feeling like it's going to victoriously resolve on the root note at the 1m mark before plunging the listener into regret instead. And all the while the piano and violin are darting around each other like lovers who have forgotten how to talk.

Then halfway through the soundscape begins to fill up, gradually but definitively confirming the anxiety of the two voices before boosting morale and ending on a hopeful rather than regretful note - the only section I actually think could be improved. The contrast with the first pass, featuring only piano and violin, is clear and appropriate, but the climax feels forced. The major chord that brings everything home feels like it either comes to soon or adds to little as it just fades out after that without truly adding to the story anymore. Compare it to reading your kid a fairy tale and finishing with 'and the wolf had eaten his entire family and he lived happily ever after' *sound of book decisively slamming shut*

But truly, that's the only criticism I can come up with. The composition is beautiful in its simplicity, the sound design is spartan but very appropriate and the production is lush and really supports the composition in drawing your listeners in. Great work, and good luck with the finals!

Never half-ass two things.
Whole-ass one thing.

Dennis van Lamoen @LuckyDee

Age 43

VA/Singer/Producer

Netherlands

Joined on 12/15/13

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