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Damn, this story is amazing, and the slightly monotone voice in which you tell it - which may or may not be a conscious decision to apply - works really well with it. The production could use some loving: the volume is kinda low, some EQ and a minute touch of reverb would add some sparkle to your voice and the background noise is an undefined rumble - either try to get rid of it or make sure it has definition. As for the storytelling itself, I don't think you need to actively put on another voice for your different characters, but if you don't, slightly longer pauses between their lines would help differentiate between them.

If you ever have another story like this one and polish it up like that, you'll have certified grade A material on your hands. Keep 'em coming!

Bleak-Creep responds:

Thanks! Yeah, the production was a rush job so that I could get it out right away and I know I’m probably not the best narrator either, but I might have to do something else with the story at some point or another. :)

I have some animations that are similar in the writing style, but they’re usually written as more of poems too. Thanks for the pointers! And thanks for listening too!

Haha, great work everyone!

Damn, this is good stuff - keep 'em coming!

This is pretty damn great!

This is absolutely stunning <3

Great work man! \m/

Dammit if I ever need frontpage material all I need to do is go through your uploaded audio - that'll keep me occupied until well into 2024 XD

Keep 'em coming!

Hey man, nice going, I think you're on to something here! The length of these skits is pretty daunting though, so I'll need to sit down and give them a good listen, but what I hear so far sounds like it could use some more sound effects or maybe a bit of music to spice it up further. And assuming you're not making heavy use of it yet, some EQ to clean up the voices. Feel free to hit me up if you want to know more. Either way, keep up the good work!

Risible responds:

About time I've received feedback on these things. I appreciate the helpful words!

Nice work Tom, and a great casting on the bartender too <3

Tommytomtom619 responds:

Thanks Lucky! I've been wanting to collab with Eltrain for a long while now.

Never half-ass two things.
Whole-ass one thing.

Dennis van Lamoen @LuckyDee

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