LuckyDee's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Commercial Voice Demo Reel]

Ace work once again, m'lady. Keep it up!

TrinaTan responds:

Always appreciate it :)

[The Keyboard Wizard]

Wow, this is very well made! Love the combination of voice processing and sound effects you got going on <3

[Arguing - Intro]

Short, and odd from a VA perspective, but I actually like this a lot - the building tension in the music really goes well with the muffled argument going on in the background, and I'd expect some killer track to kick in right after the end, when the music drops out and the voices seem to set it up perfectly. Nice work!

[Memories Past]

Golden work once again. Much <3

ZaazNG responds:

Thank you so much bb, much <3 right back at ya <333

[Burning Bush Radio episode 1]

Nice work! Also Night Vale <3

DisgruntledSkeleton responds:

Thank you!! Yeah Night Vale is amazing.

[Demo Reel 2023]

Nice work! Let's slap a frontpage sticker on this <3

[TokyoDream Voiceover Demotape]

Hey man, welcome to the club, seems you're off to a decent start. A little boost to the overall volume of your track would be good, but other than that you're sounding great. Let's see what else you'll be bringing to the table. Good luck!

TokyoDream responds:

Thanks man, I really appreciate it. I bought a new Yamaha mixing board for my Shure mic so I'm still working out the kinks. Once I've gotten a few gigs under my belt I plan to do a new demotape. Really appreciate the feedback!

[Look Within]

Great work once more, my sweet potato

ZaazNG responds:

Thank you so much, pumpkin <3

[Mirage - April Fools]

Nice work man, the story and acting are pretty damn good, although the sound could use a little polish (boosting the overall volume and applying some EQ to make the voices sound a little brighter). But that's a trick that's easily learnt, so there's nothing stopping you. Go get 'em!

[Homecoming]

Damn, this story is amazing, and the slightly monotone voice in which you tell it - which may or may not be a conscious decision to apply - works really well with it. The production could use some loving: the volume is kinda low, some EQ and a minute touch of reverb would add some sparkle to your voice and the background noise is an undefined rumble - either try to get rid of it or make sure it has definition. As for the storytelling itself, I don't think you need to actively put on another voice for your different characters, but if you don't, slightly longer pauses between their lines would help differentiate between them.

If you ever have another story like this one and polish it up like that, you'll have certified grade A material on your hands. Keep 'em coming!

Bleak-Creep responds:

Thanks! Yeah, the production was a rush job so that I could get it out right away and I know I’m probably not the best narrator either, but I might have to do something else with the story at some point or another. :)

I have some animations that are similar in the writing style, but they’re usually written as more of poems too. Thanks for the pointers! And thanks for listening too!